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Zera: A poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jason_C, Nov 8, 2005.

  1. Jason_C

    Jason_C Banned

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    Well, I'm not much of a poet. I'm actually not a poet at all. But we need more people posting here, and you know how I am about posting before thinking... So here's my attempt at writing a poem about [ycard="DR2-EN114"]Warrior of Zera[/ycard].

    Zera the beast, Zera the idol.____________(A)
    No one infers from his title_______________(A)
    If "Zera"'s his god-given name,___________(B)
    Or the term for the land_________________(C)
    From whence he came.__________________(B)

    We know not his origin;__________________(D)
    We know not his destination. _____________(D...??)
    To heaven, to hell?______________________(E)
    To join a whole different band?____________(C)
    No one on Earth can tell._________________(E)

    Zera the Angel, Zera the Demon.__________(F)
    Zera, the Creature who used to be human.__(F ? ? ??)
    Why go to another realm?_________________(G)
    Why not stay here, and make a stand?______(C)
    Maybe he went mad wearing that helm?______(G)


    Roflol. So, how was it? Be brutally honest, please.
    -pssvr

    <EDITED AS OF 06:31, 8-12-05 TO MAKE THE SYLLABLES FLOW A LITTLE BETTER>
  2. Digital Jedi

    Digital Jedi Administrator Staff Member

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    Looks like i've been misssing a lot of new posts. I'm going to move this to our Poetry section and add a link in the Index. Remeber that you can alert me of new threads by bumping the index with a link to your most recent story.
  3. Black Shadow

    Black Shadow Too Cool For School

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    LOL its not that bad seriously, and good rhyming
  4. Jason_C

    Jason_C Banned

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    You're kidding! Really? Thanks. I can't believe someone actually likes this. I try. *is flattered* Maybe I should start writing more verses?

    -pssvr
  5. Fiendishly1138

    Fiendishly1138 New Member

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    Very good rhyming. The flow was a little sketchy in the last paragraph (try to think in terms of syllables, not just getting it to rhyme ;).) But very good. And I loved the ending. Probably because I always thought his picture was a little to... blah.(Stupid Helm!) Personally, I always thought that this card had vast theological merit, and deserved to be studied more closely. It's nice to see someone else see's that too.
  6. Black Shadow

    Black Shadow Too Cool For School

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    sure i would read them if you posted more verses:smile:

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