help me out, soul/chaos control....thing? r & f

[bugtastic]

YYYEEEEAAA......i need a lil' help yall. i tried to make my own chaos control.....annnnnnddd..... well....i just need some help. if ya could give some suggestions, ANY SUGGESTIONS. t/y.


monsters (20)
Tributes

Sacred Phoenix Of The Nephthys
Jinzo
Mobius the Frost Monarch
Chaos Sorcerer
Cyber Dragon X2
Airknight Parshath

non-tributes

Exarion Universe
Breaker the Magical Warrior
D. D. Warrior Lady
Don Zaloog
Tsukuyomi
Exiled Force
Sangan
Hand of Nephthys
Apprentice Magician X2
Magician of Faith
Spirit Reaper
Magical Merchant

magic

Scapegoat
Nobleman of Crossout
Heavy Storm
Snatch Steal
Smashing Ground X2
Brain Control
Premature Burial
Soul Exchange
Mystical Space Typhoon
Dark Hole
Reinforcement of the Army
Swords of Revealing Light

traps

Torrential Tribute
Call of the Haunted
Sakuretsu Armor X3
Dust Tornado X2

 

[kingpinopie]

hmmm.. i see the idea... im thinking....

Lets start with traps... i think they look good....but for fun and for a strategy you will soon see... lets replace 1 Sakuretsu Armor with 1 Return from the Different Dimension

Now monsters...... you seem a bit tribute heavy... i know you like them all , but we need to make your deck flow better .. Phoenix is a great card, good tech, but high maintenance and a great distraction in this deck... Jinzo is a good card as well, but is just a negator.... lets not hurt YOU in the process of trying to win....
- The Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys
- Jinzo

Now ... we need to put something there to help you out better.... lets put in 1 more Mobius the Frost Monarch.. Destruction is better than negation any day of the week
+ Mobius the Frost Monarch
Now lets add one more Chaos Sorcerer
+1 Chaos Sorcerer (this is why the Return from the Different Dimension is going to be a good card for you )

Now this is going to free up some room for SYNERGY.. and field presence help...
-2 Apprentice Magician
-1 Hand of Nephthys

+2 Mystic Tomato
+1 Don Zaloog / Cyber Jar (your choice )

Now Im not sure what to do ... we are still tribute heavy... try it this way.. Mobius work great together..... however its still heavy.. if things keep feeling trib heavy look at losing either Airknight Parshath or 1 Cyber Dragon.... and bringing on board a Reflect Bounder

Well those are my suggestions... I feel it could help out a lot .... just one more real quick though... I would like to see you be able to reuse Exiled Force or Don Zaloog easier... so can you bring in 2 The Warrior Returning Alive ?? it will bring you up to 42, but i think it will be a good asset.... just an afterthought..
Hope Ive helped...
Laterz