Two decks in desperate need of repair.

[D.M.E.N.]

As the title says, I have two decks. One is my Dark deck. I like it but I think it could be better. The second.............(sigh sadly) is in desperate need of repair. I don't even know what to call it.

Dark Deck

Monsters:22
Tribute Monsters:6
x1 Berserk Dragon
x2 Despair From The Dark
x2 Patrician of Darkness
x1 Vampire Lord (I only have one)

Non-Tribute:14
x3 Regenerating Mummy
x2 Fear From The Dark
x1 Double Coston
x3 Pyramid Turtle (I use them for Patrician and Vampire Lord)
x1 Castle of Dark Illusions (why not?)
x1 Cyber Jar
x2 Witch's Apprentice (I only summon her when Patrician is on the field)
x1 Mucus Yolk (also only when Patrician is out)

Fusion Monsters:2
Reaper On The Nightmare

Spell Cards:14
x2 Mystic Plasma Zone
x2 Book of Life
x1 Terraforming
x1 A Deal With Dark Ruler
x1 Premature Burial
x2 Metamorphosis
x2 Dark Core
x1 Mystical Space Typhoon
x2 Big Bang Shot (mainly for Berserk Dragon)

Trap Cards:6
x2 Dust Tornado
x2 Compulsory Evacuation Device
x1 Call of the Haunted
x1 Rope of Life (I love this card)

Side Deck
x2 Call of the Mummy (I don't like this card but I have nothing to replace it)
x1 Tutan Mask (I only have one)
x2 Spear Cretin
x1 Snatch Steal
x1 Dark Hole
x1 Compulsory Evacuation Device
x2 Chain Disappearance
x2 Spirit Reaper
x2 Getsu Fuhma (in case my opponent takes control of my monsters)
x1 Double Coston)


My Second Deck......(dissapointing sigh)

Monsters:22
Tribute Monsters:5
x2 Great Maju Garzett (the heart of the deck, I guess)
x1 Invader of Darkness
x1 Fusilier Dragon, The Dual-Mode Beast (I only have one)
x1 Jinzo

Non-Tribute:15
x2 Rare Metal Dragon
x2 Zombyra the Dark
x1 Vorse Raider (I just love this card)
x1 Mad Dog of Darkness
x2 Insect Knight
x2 Des Kangaroo
x2 The Earth-Hex Sealed Fusion
x2 Obnoxious Celtic Guard
x1 Cyber Jar

Fusion Monsters:2
x2 Master of Oz (IF IT'S SOMETHING THAT CAN BE STOPPED, THEN JUST TRY TO STOP IT!!!!!!!)

Spell Cards:13
x2 Polymerization
x1 Lightning Vortex
x1 United We Stand (fun,fun,fun)
x2 Axe of Despair (primarily for the Celtic Guard)
x1 Amplifier
x2 Tribute To The Doomed
x1 Soul Exchange
x1 Mystical Space Typhoon
x1 Premature Burial
x1 Dark Hole

Trap Cards:7
x2 Dust Tornado
x1 Call of the Haunted
x1 Rope Of Life
x2 A Hero Emerges (BRING OUT THE BIG GUNS!!)
x1 A Rival Appears! (I only have one)

Side Deck
x2 The Fiend Megacyber
x2 Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke (strong ATK, and gets rid of those pesky 'not destroyed as a result of battle' monsters)
x1 Des Kangaroo
x1 The Earth-Hex Sealed Fusion
x1 Sangan
x1 Autonomous Action Unit
x1 Snatch Steal
x1 Heavy Storm
x1 Meteorain (just in case)
x2 Ultimate Offering
x2 Magic Jammer (if proven necessary)


So, those are my decks. For the most part in their lackluster glory. Please be as brutally honest as you deem worthy, I need it.

 

[Inuyasha_Riku]

hmm...ur off to a good start in ur dark zombie one...i'd just stick with that one for now....id take ur Jinzo from ur other one and put it in to the zombie deck...and theres a lot of stuff in ur side deck u should put in the main deck for that...add

the 2 Spirit Reaper
Dark Hole(SHOULD be in the deck my friend..no matter what)
Snatch Steal(same as above)
2xRyu Kokki(anti warrior and spellcasters) good beatsticks
Scapegoat(extra protection)
Magician of Faith(spell recursion is limited and good)


take out the Berserk Dragon, deal with dark ruler, Mucus Yolk, and Witch's Apprentice...

side deck the Patrician of Darkness and the Despairs from the Darks and Double Coston

if u can, try to get another zombie structure deck, then u can get another Vampire Lord and a whole bunch of other stuff for ur zombie deck

and on one last note, u can only have ONE Metamorphosis now so id take one out

good luck with the deck.