G.M.G./Fusion/Beatdown Opponent says "what the..."

[D.M.E.N.]

This deck, is Bananas, B-A-N-A-N-A-S.
I'm sorry but I had to say it.

Not sure if it's Advanced Format worthy, but I'd like it to be.
(some edits made so the Cookie Slayer Collective can see the deck in it's current form)
Deck Count: 40

Tributes: 8 (ideally 3)
Great Maju Garzett x2 (the heart of the deck)
Cyber Dragon x3
The Fiend Megacyber
Majestic Mech - Goryu (my fav :nerd )
Majestic Mech - Ohka

Non-Tributes: 12
Breaker The Magical Warrior
Chainsaw Insect
D.D. Assailant
Des Kangaroo x2
The Earth - Hex-Sealed Fusion x3 (trying to make this more versatile)
The Light - Hex-Sealed Fusion x2
Zombyra The Dark x2

Spells: 13
Big Bang Shot x2
Giant Trunade
Graceful Charity
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Metamorphosis
Mystical Space Typhoon
Nobleman Of Crossout
Premature Burial
Smashing Ground x2
Swords Of Revealing Light

Traps: 7
Call Of The Haunted
Dust Tornado x2
Ring Of Destruction
Sakuretsu Armor x2
Ultimate Offering

Fusion Deck: 12
Cyber End Dragon (keeping my options open)
Cyber Ogre 2
Cyber Twin Dragon x2
Dark Blade The Dragon Knight
Fiend Skull Dragon
The Last Warrior From Another Planet x2
Master Of Oz x3
Super Vehicroid Jumbo Drill

Side Deck
Chainsaw Insect
D.D. Survivor
Despair From The Dark
Fusilier Dragon, The Dual-Mode Beast
Mystic Swordsman LV4
Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
Spear Cretin x2
Axe Of Despair x2
Magical Mallet
Monster Reincarnation
Physical Double (fun combo with this one. But very dependent on opponent)
Return From The Different Dimension
Torrential Tribute

Review/ suggest Away!

 

[D.M.E.N.]

Well, it's been a little over a week and although a good amount have looked at the deck, no one's given any suggestions on how to improve it. Now, does this mean I've built the deck so well no suggestions are needed, or it's so terrible no addition/ removal will save it? :huh

(personally I think the latter)

 

[Peps]

So a Great Maju Garzett Beatdown with Earth Fusing, hmmm let's see what fixes I can offer... firstly, I definately would not go through the Polymerization method, it's often too big of a risk to run. You could easily run into a Sakuretsu Armor or Bottomless Trap Hole. So that should already make a few modifications.

Deck Count: 40

Tributes: 8 (ideally 3)
Great Maju Garzett x2 (the heart of the deck)
Cyber Dragon x2
The Fiend Megacyber
Fusilier Dragon, The Dual-Mode Beast
Majestic Mech-Goryu (my fav :nerd )
Majestic Mech-Ohka

Non-Tributes: 12
Chainsaw Insect
Des Kangaroo x2
The Earth - Hex-Sealed Fusion x3 (trying to make this more versatile)
Elemental Hero Wildheart
Mystic Swordsman LV4
Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
Spear Cretin x2
Zombyra The Dark

Spells: 11
Heavy Storm
Lightning Vortex
Magical Mallet
Mausoleum Of The Emperor
Metamorphosis
Monster Reincarnation
Mystical Space Typhoon
Polymerization x2
Premature Burial
Swords Of Revealing Light

Traps: 9
Call Of The Haunted
Compulsory Evacuation Device x2
Dust Tornado x2
Hidden Book Of Spell
Sakuretsu Armor x2
Ultimate Offering

-1 The Fiend Megacyber
-1 Fusilier Dragon, the Dual-Mode Beast
-1 Chainsaw Insect
-1 Elemental Hero Wildheart
-1 Mystic Swordsman LV4
-1 Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke
-2 Spear Cretin
-1 Lightning Vortex
-1 Metamorphosis
-1 Magical Mallet
-1 Mausoleum of the Emperor
-1 Monster Reincarnation
-2 Polymerization
-1 Ultimate Offering
-1 Hidden Book of Spell
-2 Compulsory Evacuation Device

19 Slots to work with...

Right in order to make Great Maju Garzett somewhat devastating, it's going to need an easy 4000 attack. Some extra Zombyra the Dark will do nicely for that job. More special summoning monsters will also be beneficial so an extra Cyber Dragon is needed if you have one. I'm also going advise The Light - Hex-Sealed Fusion. Since you have Cyber Twin Dragon, you can always try and bring out Cyber Twin Dragon using The Light - Hex-Sealed Fusion's effect. For the last three monster, I'm going to suggest Breaker the Magical Warrior (acts as a floater to tribute), one Exiled Force and one Giant Rat.

+2 Zombyra the Dark
+1 Cyber Dragon
+2 The Light - Hex-Sealed Fusion
+1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
+1 Exiled Force
+1 Giant Rat

Onto the magics, first to go obviously is Graceful Charity. Next you are going to want to search out Zombyra and Exiled Force so I suggest a pair of Reinforcement of the Army. Nobleman of Crossout is also neccessary is such an aggressive deck. I'll toss in two Smashing Grounds in order to combat any Spirit Reaper problems.

+1 Graceful Charity
+2 Reinforcement of the Army
+1 Nobleman of Crossout
+2 Smashing Ground

Now there are a bunch of options I could suggest. If you want to be extra original, you could always go with Big Bang Shot or something similar. With the Dust Tornados, although Big Bang Shot can be a -1 in advantage, you could inflict a large amount of damage especially with a 4400 trample monster. A single Giant Trunade could also combo with the Big Bang Shot, use it as a field clearer, or equip Big Bang Shot to troublesome monsters on your opponent's field. Remember also that if you equip Big Bang Shot to your opponent's monster, even if they attack they will receive all of the damage.

+2 Big Bang Shot
+1 Giant Trunade

The traps just need some minor adjustments in order to complete the deck. Ring of Destruction and Mirror Force/Torrential Tribute should go in. Ring can be your ultimate game ender and can make this deck an otk variant. If you were to trample a lot of damage with Great Maju Garzett, you could just use Ring of Destruction to inflict an extra 4000 damage assuming you will still be alive.

+1 Ring of Destruction
+1 Mirror Force / Torrential Tribute

The final version of the deck should look something like this:

Deck Count: 40
Tributes: 7
[2] Great Maju Garzett
[3] Cyber Dragon
[1] Majestic Mech-Goryu
[1] Majestic Mech-Ohka

Non-Tributes: 13
[2] Des Kangaroo
[3] The Earth - Hex-Sealed Fusion
[2] The Light - Hex-Sealed Fusion
[3] Zombyra the Dark
[1] Breaker the Magical Warrior
[1] Exiled Force
[1] Giant Rat

Spells: 13
[1] Heavy Storm
[1] Mystical Space Typhoon
[1] Premature Burial
[1] Swords of Revealing Light
[1] Graceful Charity
[2] Reinforcement of the Army
[1] Nobleman of Crossout
[2] Smashing Ground
[2] Big Bang Shot
[1] Giant Trunade

Traps: 7
[1] Call of the Haunted
[2] Dust Tornado
[2] Sakuretsu Armor
[1] Ring of Destruction
[1] Mirror Force / Torrential Tribute

 

[D.M.E.N.]

Thanks for the suggestion Peps. I play tested it and the deck does work much better. And yet as helpful as Breaker is, it doesn't seem to fit the deck right....Probably just because it's the only spellcaster.

Anyway thank you for the advice. :duel_yes