HE DOES IT AGAIN, ANOTHER UNIQUE DECK!!!! Rate, fix, etc.

[exiledforcefreak]

3|Dcr|Dark Master - Zorc
3|Tlm|Reshef the Dark Being
3|Dcr|Berserk Dragon
3|Ioc|Manju of the Ten Thousand Hands
3|Mrl|Senju of the Thousand Hands
3|Mrl|Sonic Bird
1|Dcr|Tsukuyomi
3|Rds|Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive

2|Dcr|A Deal with Dark Ruler
3|Dcr|Contract with the Dark Master
3|Tlm|Final Ritual of the Ancients
1|Mrl|Mystical Space Typhoon
1|Psv|Nobleman of Crossout
1|Mrd|Heavy Storm
1|Lob|Dark Hole
1|Tlm|Brain Control
1|Mrl|Snatch Steal
1|Pgd|Book of Moon
1|Fet|Fulfillment of the Contract
1|Psv|Premature Burial

1|Lon|Torrential Tribute
1|Psv|Call of the Haunted
2|Tp4|Royal Decree

Currently 43 cards, anyone wanna help me trim the fat?

 

[Dillie-O]

Ooooh, tasty, lots of rituals going around there. I'm thinking you may be stuck hanging a few times when you don't have enough pieces to put a ritual summon together. Would a Swords or Threatening Roar help this out? The Berserk Dragon is quite a tasty touch, that will make things brutal in no time.

 

[Jason_C]

This does not even remotely count as original. Joining the two highest fiend rituals has been a common deck theme for abitious demons since Reshef was released. Torrential isn't needed here. Nor is Book of Moon, and I think you could afford to drop one Berserk Dragon. And yes, I do understand why there are three berserks in there, but you still could drop one, IMHO.
-pssvr

 

[exiledforcefreak]

why would I drop torrential? I can use with Berserk Dragon.

Berserk Dragon and dekoichi is what makes mine differant then everone else's. It's what makes mine unique.

 

[Jason_C]

It's not. It's soemthing I have seen several other people, myself included, use for both ritual fodder and / or field presence. You would drop torrential because not every great deck is cookie cutter or staple-tastic. Perhaps you could (it's just a thought) drop all traps, tsuki, and dekoichi, then add in 3x Light of Intervention for some anti-meta flare.

-pssvr