Looking for input

[sirch1964]

I built this deck last night but not sure about it. I built it different than most of my other decks. I know that I am using some of the same cards as usual, it's just that I have not used some of these cards together. What I am asking for is input and suggestions.

Monsters 18
Tribute: 5
1 Jinzo - For trap control
1 Mobius the Frost Monarch - trap/spell removal
2 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch - Card removal and possible damage
1 Chaos Sorcerer - Monster removal

Normal: 13
2 Chiron the Mage - spell/trap removal
2 Getsu Fuhma - Fiend/Zombie protection/removal
1 Asura Priest - Multi Attack
1 Pitch-Black Warwolf - Battle phase trap control
1 Helping Robo For Combat - Hand renewel
1 Elemental Hero Wildheart - Uneffected by traps
1 The Stern Mystic - See what your opponent has
1 Legacy Hunter - Opponent returns card to deck and shuffles
1 Witch Doctor of Chaos - Card removal from play
1 Magician of Faith - Return 1 spell from grave
1 Night Assailant - card removal

Spell: 17
2 Rush Recklessly
1 Premature Burial
2 Reinforcement of the Army
1 Nobleman of Extermination
1 Lightning Blade
1 Heavy Storm
1 Soul Exchange
1 Swords of Concealing Light
1 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Wicked-Breaking Flamberge - Baou
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Soul Release
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Megamorph
1 Card Destruction

Traps: 7
1 Chain Burst
1 Curse of Darkness
1 Fake Trap
2 Waboku
1 Coffin Seller
1 Call of the Haunted

Side Deck: 15
1 Wicked-Breaking Flamberge - Baou
1 Sword of Dragon's Soul
1 Graverobber
1 Skill Drain
1 Cursed Seal of the Forbidden Spell
1 Divine Wrath
1 Hidden Book of Spell
1 Shadow Spell
1 Barrel Behind the Door
1 Life Absorbing Machine
1 Fairy Box
1 Blast with Chain
1 Trap of Board Eraser
1 Tsukuyomi
1 Twinheaded Beast

 

[00Patience]

I built this deck last night but not sure about it. I built it different than most of my other decks. I know that I am using some of the same cards as usual, it's just that I have not used some of these cards together. What I am asking for is input and suggestions.

Monsters 18
Tribute: 5
1 Jinzo - For trap control
1 Mobius the Frost Monarch - trap/spell removal
2 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch - Card removal and possible damage
1 Chaos Sorcerer - Monster removal

Normal: 13
2 Chiron the Mage - spell/trap removal
2 Getsu Fuhma - Fiend/Zombie protection/removal
1 Asura Priest - Multi Attack
1 Pitch-Black Warwolf - Battle phase trap control
1 Helping Robo For Combat - Hand renewel
1 Elemental Hero Wildheart - Uneffected by traps
1 The Stern Mystic - See what your opponent has
1 Legacy Hunter - Opponent returns card to deck and shuffles
1 Witch Doctor of Chaos - Card removal from play
1 Magician of Faith - Return 1 spell from grave
1 Night Assailant - card removal

Spell: 17
2 Rush Recklessly
1 Premature Burial
2 Reinforcement of the Army
1 Nobleman of Extermination
1 Lightning Blade
1 Heavy Storm
1 Soul Exchange
1 Swords of Concealing Light
1 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Wicked-Breaking Flamberge - Baou
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Soul Release
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Megamorph
1 Card Destruction

Traps: 7
1 Chain Burst
1 Curse of Darkness
1 Fake Trap
2 Waboku
1 Coffin Seller
1 Call of the Haunted

Side Deck: 15
1 Wicked-Breaking Flamberge - Baou
1 Sword of Dragon's Soul
1 Graverobber
1 Skill Drain
1 Cursed Seal of the Forbidden Spell
1 Devine Wrath
1 Hidden Book of Spell
1 Shadow Spell
1 Barrel Behind the Door
1 Life Absorbing Machine
1 Fairy Box
1 Blast with Chain
1 Trap of Board Eraser
1 Tsukuyomi
1 Twinheaded Beast

This deck is seriously all over the place, with all the traps you have I don't see the point in Fake Trap you only have 7 traps.
Dump the The Stern Mystic, and Witch Doctor of Chaos for a Reflect Bounder or Magical Merchant. Prolly find a way to fit a Cyber Jar in because you'll never have what you need for Chaos Sorcerer, Jar will help, also with all those small strategies running all over in this deck. If they're is some strategy I'm not seeing please inform me and I'll rectify what I've said.

 

[sirch1964]

This deck is seriously all over the place, with all the traps you have I don't see the point in Fake Trap you only have 7 traps.
Dump the The Stern Mystic, and Witch Doctor of Chaos for a Reflect Bounder or Magical Merchant. Prolly find a way to fit a Cyber Jar in because you'll never have what you need for Chaos Sorcerer, Jar will help, also with all those small strategies running all over in this deck. If they're is some strategy I'm not seeing please inform me and I'll rectify what I've said.

I know that this deck appears all over the place but when I play tested it tonight, it was fast and very effective. I do plan on finding something for The Stern Mystic (even though it worked out, it just isn't tough enough) and Witch Doctor of Chaos. I really wich I owned a reflector bounder not just for this deck but a couple others I have. I also do not have a Cyber Jar. As far as getting Chaos Sorcerer out, I had no problem and same with the Monarchs. I really am looking at some sort of spell card change to work with what I have.

So I went back and made some changes and this is what came out of it.

Monsters: 18
1 Jinzo
1 Mobius the Frost Monarch
2 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch
1 Chaos Sorcerer
2 Mechanicalchaser (*new*) for attack strength
1 Homunculus the Alchemic Being (*new*) ability to change attribute
2 Gearfried the Iron Knight (*new*) strength
2 Chiron the Mage
2 Getsu Fuhma
1 Asura Priest
1 Helping Robo For Combat
1 Elemental Hero Wildheart
1 Magician of Faith
1 Night Assailant

Spell: 18
2 Rush Recklessly
1 Premature Burial
2 Reinforcement of the Army
2 Nobleman of Extermination
1 Lightning Blade
1 Heavy Storm
1 Soul Exchange
1 Swords of Concealing Light
1 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Wicked-Breaking Flamberge - Baou
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Soul Release
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Megamorph
1 Card Destruction

Traps: 4
2 Waboku
1 Coffin Seller
1 Call of the Haunted

Side Deck: 15
1 Double Snare (*new*)
1 Judgment of Anubis (*new*)
1 Graverobber
1 Skill Drain
1 Cursed Seal of the Forbidden Spell
1 Divine Wrath
1 Hidden Book of Spell
1 Shadow Spell
1 Riryoku Field (*new*)
1 Spell-Stopping Statute (*new*)
1 Life Absorbing Machine
1 Fairy Box
1 Blast with Chain
1 Beckoning Light (*new*)
1 Tsukuyomi
1 Chaos Sorcerer (*new*)