please rate my deck

[Sakura Sakamoto]

i was just interested to see how cookie my deck is and to
see if it could be improved in anyway.

monsters 18
tribute 4
jinzo
mobius the frost monarche
2x cyber dragon
non tribute
breaker the magical warrior
slate warrior
d.d assailant
d.d warrior lady
2x magician of faith
2x enraged battle ox
berserk gorilla
exrion universe
d.d survivor
blade knightinjection fairt lily
treeborn frog
magic
swords of revealing light
2x smashing ground
2x nobleman of crossout
pot of averice
snatch steal
premature burial
brain control
giant trunade
mystical spoace typhoon
gracful charity
scapegoat
heavy storm
traps
3x sakuretsu armor
bottomless trap hole
mirror force
magic cylinder
torrential tribute
call of the haunted

 

[wolfpac420]

no slate warrior, berserk gorrilla, exrion universe, d.d. survivor,injection fairy lily,blade knight, d.d. assailant,giant trunade,magic cylinder, enraged battleox

 

[Sakura Sakamoto]

recently iv'e changed my deck slightly.
heres my changes

monsters 18
tribute 4
jinzo
mobius the frost monarch
kaiser glider
the end of anubis
non tribute
breaker the magical warrior
slate warrior
d.d assailant
d.d warrior lady
magician of faith
spirit reaper
spear dragon
kycoo the ghost destroyer
blockman
exrion universe
d.d survivor
blade knight
injection fairy lily
treeborn frog
magic
swords of revealing light
2x smashing ground
2x nobleman of crossout
pot of averice
snatch steal
premature burial
brain control
giant trunade
mystical spoace typhoon
gracful charity
scapegoat
heavy storm
traps
2x sakuretsu armor
2x bottomless trap hole
mirror force
trap hole
torrential tribute
call of the haunted

 

[jakethesnake]

its alrite, but not really my favorite style. I like more of a field control deck, and one with as few tribute monsters as possible, but i like it still. Id give it an 8.3 out of 10, if there was a 10 point scale