Some normal deck i put together...

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nkarunatilaka

The Syndicate...
Just a "everyday" deck that i put together.
Any advice, greatly appreciated.

Deck Total 42

Monsters 21
1 Jinzo
2 Cyber Dragon
2 Chaos Sorcerer
1 Airknight Parshath
2 Gravekeeper's Spy
1 D.D. Warrior Lady
1 Mystic Swordsman LV2
1 Magical Merchant
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
1 Morphing Jar
1 Cyber Jar
1 Blade Knight
1 Sangan
1 Tsukuyomi
1 Exiled Force
1 Magician of Faith
1 Spirit Reaper
1 Elemental Hero Bubbleman <<- personal flavor (testing it out)

spells 10
1 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Heavy Storm
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Dark Hole
1 Scapegoat
1 Brain Control
1 Premature Burial
1 Snatch Steal
1 Book of Moon
1 Mystical Space Typhoon

traps 11
3 Sakuretsu Armor
2 Bottomless Trap Hole
2 Dust Tornado
2 Return from the Different Dimension
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Torrential Tribute
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sidedeck 15
2 Mobius the Frost Monarch
1 Zaborg the Thunder Monarch
2 Mystic Tomato
2 Newdoria
2 Don Zaloog
1 Waboku
1 Ceasefire
1 Cannon Soldier
2 Solemn Judgment
1 Spell Canceller
 
What is this...????

Yeah, your deck looks good and all... but why is there a Bubbleman in there????


Wow, you suck at deck building if you put that in there.

Also, why do you play sooo many monsters and only 10 spells and 10 traps??? You dont know the first thing about deck building....
 
Okay nhacker. I see you are new to our forums relatively speaking. Constructive crtisim is of course, the purpose of this section of the forums. We all look to each other for each one's unique insites.

But comments like "you suck at deck building" and "you don't know the first thing about deck building" do not fall into the category of constructive critisism. So I encourage you NOT to make those kind of statements again.

If you have some constructive insites on how you think he can improve his deck, then feel free to post them. But please do so in a mature and respectful manner.
 
nhacker said:
Yeah, your deck looks good and all... but why is there a Bubbleman in there????


Wow, you suck at deck building if you put that in there.

Also, why do you play sooo many monsters and only 10 spells and 10 traps??? You dont know the first thing about deck building....
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Um... ok.

Well then, what do you think I should change, since i dont know the first thing about deck building... I would very much like to know your input.

-Neil
 
nkarunatilaka said:
Just a "everyday" deck that i put together.
Any advice, greatly appreciated.

Deck Total 40

Monsters 19
3 Cyber Dragon
2 Chaos Sorcerer
1 D.D. Warrior Lady
1 Mystic Swordsman LV2
2 Magical Merchant
1 Breaker the Magical Warrior
2 Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive
2 Blade Knight
1 Sangan
1 Tsukuyomi
1 Magician of Faith
2 Spirit Reaper

spells 12
1 Nobleman of Crossout
1 Heavy Storm
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Dark Hole
1 Scapegoat
2 Smashing Ground
1 Pot of Avarice
1 Premature Burial
1 Snatch Steal
1 Book of Moon
1 Mystical Space Typhoon

traps 9
3 Sakuretsu Armor
2 Bottomless Trap Hole
2 Dust Tornado
1 Call of the Haunted
1 Torrential Tribute
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sidedeck 15
2 Mobius the Frost Monarch
1 Zaborg the Thunder Monarch
2 Mystic Tomato
2 Newdoria
2 Don Zaloog
1 Waboku
1 Ceasefire
1 Cannon Soldier
2 Solemn Judgment
1 Spell Canceller
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^Edits Shown Above^


Just plain take out Cyber Jar and Elemental Hero Bubbleman (No need to test it, I can tell you it won't work)

Exiled Force is a waste of a summon and it's neither dark nor light. So take that out for a second helpful Blade Knight.

Off the annoying Jinzo for a third Cyber Dragon. More lights, more power to the Chaos Sorcerer. Jinzo can get in YOUR way, especially with your version of 11 traps.

Airknight Parshath was supposedly going to be good in the new format, with draw power and all. But with the coming of Cyber Dragon, he's a pointless addition. Take him out for another Magical Merchant (more power to Chaos Sorcerer and Pot of Avarice :D)

Out with the Morphing Jar, it's too risky with the Dark World craze going on. And in with the Dekoichi Battlechanted Locomotive, for Draw power and dark for your graveyard. You can also try to abuse him with that Tsukuyomi you have plesantly placed in your deck already.

The Gravekeeper's Spy's are a nice addition to this deck, but I'd imagine a second Dekoichi and second Spirit Reaper would be a lot more benefitial, if you understand how those two work.

Brain Control isn't very good in this deck, unless you take their monster to attack, which isn't it's best use. You have no Mobius, Thestalos, nor Zaborg, and you run 3 Cyber Dragon's as your tribute monsters (or will?) which are primarily special summoned. So off that for a Smashing Ground (you have BARELY any monster removal, if you don't have Smashing Grounds, use Fissures)

Those two Return from the Different Dimension's aren't very necessary seeing as you do not remove ALL that much. (aside from the two Chaos Sorcerer's) So take them out for one Smashing Ground and one Pot of Avarice. Pot of Avarice works well in this deck, considering the Magical Merchant's. Sure it contradicts the usage of Chaos Sorcerer, but usually you'll have like 6 darks and 2 lights, mid-duel. So that should be ok. Shuffling in those Dekoichi's Sangan and Spirit Reapers. If it works out that way. And 2 cards will put you back on your feet (if you're off your feet)

The deck actually looks quite nice. I hope I influence some permanent edits. :D
 
I like the suggestions. Looks similar to my tourney deck i use. This one was just for fun.

But thanks for the comments and suggestions. :)
 
Complex_Mind said:
And your point? It's a good deck. :)
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If you THINK so. He wanted a casual Deck. If he wanted a Tourney Deck he would have just used his own. It is a shame that even when someone wanting to make a "fun" Deck is resorted to using tourney Decks in the equation. In fact, in his words this is just an "everyday" Deck. Sad to see.

My suggestion to the original poster. If you want to make a everyday Deck or fun Deck or whatever it was that you wanted it to represent, start over, find a theme you want to go with (I.E. Elemental Hero) and work from there. Using Elemental Hero Bubbleman is not a bad idea, but you need either a Elemental Hero Deck to use it with or a Deck that focuses on using it, like using Card of Sanctity, Rope of Life, or just flat out getting cards out of your hand.
 
Tiso said:
If you THINK so. He wanted a casual Deck. If he wanted a Tourney Deck he would have just used his own. It is a shame that even when someone wanting to make a "fun" Deck is resorted to using tourney Decks in the equation. In fact, in his words this is just an "everyday" Deck. Sad to see.

My suggestion to the original poster. If you want to make a everyday Deck or fun Deck or whatever it was that you wanted it to represent, start over, find a theme you want to go with (I.E. Elemental Hero) and work from there. Using Elemental Hero Bubbleman is not a bad idea, but you need either a Elemental Hero Deck to use it with or a Deck that focuses on using it, like using Card of Sanctity, Rope of Life, or just flat out getting cards out of your hand.
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If he wanted a CASUAL DECK. He should be posting in the CASUAL DECK section. :D
 
why does it matter...its a deck...he wants us to fix it...thats all that counts....looks like its coming along n....^_^
 
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