Exodia with a small twist

[Chillout1984]

Monsters: (23 cards)
3x Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World
1x Broww, Huntsman of Dark World
1x Brron, Mad King of Dark World
2x Emissary of the Afterlife
1x Exodia the Forbidden One
1x Left Arm of the Forbidden One
1x Left Leg of the Forbidden One
1x Magician of Faith
2x Manticore of Darkness
1x Right Arm of the Forbidden One
1x Right Leg of the Forbidden One
1x Sangan
3x Spear Cretin
3x Thunder Dragon
1x Toon Cannon Soldier

Spells: (13 cards)
2x Card of Safe Return
2x Dark Factory of Mass Production
1x Dark Hole
2x Dark World Lightning
1x Monster Reincarnation
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Premature Burial
1x Scapegoat
2x Toon Table of Contents

Traps: (4 cards)

1x Call of the Haunted
2x Jar of Greed
1x Torrential Tribute



This is my newest Exodia deck. I won 3 out of 4 games against a traditional Spellcaster deck, but I lost 3 out of 3 games against an advanced light deck (with the XYZ fusions).


Does anybody have a suggestion to make this deck better?

 

[BenjaminMS]

This Deck could be helped by adding 2 Infinite Cards. Makes the standard handsize-trouble of Exodia-Decks melt away in your Deck.

<EDIT: I understand the reason of Manticore of Darkness. But reduce it by one, because it will often turn out to be that Scapegoat can't be drawn fast enough to help>

 

[Duelmaster]

This Deck could be helped by adding 2 Infinite Cards. Makes the standard handsize-trouble of Exodia-Decks melt away in your Deck.

<EDIT: I understand the reason of Manticore of Darkness. But reduce it by one, because it will often turn out to be that Scapegoat can't be drawn fast enough to help>

THE COMBO

(Netrep Card Registery)

If "Card of Safe Return" is active, and "Manticore of Darkness" is Special Summoned with its effect, you can draw a card. So with 2 "Manticores of Darkness", 1 of them sent to the Graveyard, and "Card of Safe Return" in play, you can draw as many cards as you want.

 

[krazykidpsx]

you could get rid of the dark world creatures.

 

[Chillout1984]

you could get rid of the dark world creatures.

-_-'

I need the dark world creatures for more draw power

Dark World + Card of Safe Return is pretty cool

And the dark world creatures ARE the cards that are the twist in my deck

 

[skey23]

-_-'

I need the dark world creatures for more draw power

Dark World + Card of Safe Return is pretty cool

And the dark world creatures ARE the cards that are the twist in my deck

Remember, that only works if they're discarded by YOUR card effect. It doesn't if it's by your opponent's effect.

 

[krazykidpsx]

yep, cause you will be missing the timing.

you should check up on the rulings before attempting to use cards together.

This game isnt like Magic or Vs. were stuff like this can happen easily.

 

[Chillout1984]

Remember, that only works if they're discarded by YOUR card effect. It doesn't if it's by your opponent's effect.

I know.. That's why I have 2 Dark World Lightning in my deck